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20 OCT 05
Alpine

At her new (second) blog, Laura Carter has been posting some beautiful work from the New Collected Poems of George Oppen (I'm not a desert-island-ten-books type but--definitely, this book). Back before I acquired the New Collected, I came upon a photo online (here) of a signed & folded typescript of Oppen's poem "Alpine." And although he made subsequent revisions, this is my favorite version:

Alpine

We were hiding
Somewhere in the Alps
In a barn among animals. We knew
Our daughter should not know
We were there. It was cold
Was the point of the dream
And the snow was falling

Which must be an old dream of families
Dispersing into adulthood

And the will cowers
In the given

The outlaw winds
That move within barns

A public
Music

As tho one had lost
The one who is sleeping

And his enviable songs

Does that one die
First as one dies

And the distinction of what one does
And what is done to him blurrs

Bodies dream selves
For themselves

From the substance
Of the cold

Yet we move
Are moving

Are we not

Does one hear the heavy moving
Of the past in barns


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